Chapter 25 and revisions

Although, I didn't make an announcement, I did complete and post Chapter 25 on Saturday. I hope you like the direction the story is heading. Since you are reading a novel in progress, you get to see how I work. Over the course of writing the story, I have veered a bit off the course I intended at the beginning. To me, that is part of the fun. I think up new twists as I am writing. But in order to do some things, it requires that I go back and make changes to what I wrote earlier so that I can maintain consistency. Additionally, I wanted to add depth to a few of the characters. The first thing I did was to take the chapter titled "The Break - Chapter 1 and Chapter 2" and renamed it "Chapter 1". The content is basically the same. I just replaced the "Chapter 2" with a dotted line. Now it is in the same format as the later chapters. Then I renamed Chapter 3 to Chapter 2. It still starts with Ronnie setting traps for the furbies. I added a dotted line for the second half of the chapter. The second half introduces Sheila and Morgan, Big Ron's wife and daughter. I need these two for later in the story. They had been in the original version, but for some reason I skipped over them when I started this. Chapter 3 is completely new. This is the section where I wanted to add depth. One to Ronnie's writing abilities and talent. Second, I wanted to give the basis to Big Ron's health issues. In the future, I will be adding to the earlier chapters to build depth and consistency. I will let you know when I do. Technorati Tags: Fiction, Online Book, Chapter, Rebeleyeball, Paul Gavin IceRocket Tags: Fiction, Blook, Chapter, Rebeleyeball Copyright (c) 2006 Paul Gavin. All rights reserved.