Chapter 19 is available for your viewing pleasure
Unlike the previous chapters, you may notice that Chapter 19 only has one story. Mainly because I wanted to stick to the two chapter a week pace and that's all I could write yesterday. I cannot believe how crappy I have felt for the last 3 days. Anyway, I hope you like Chapter 19. I think I came pretty close to one possibility of what it must be like to be in the situation Ass finds himself. Having never been in that situation myself, I really don't know. Anyone care to comment? If you can't tell, I really like these 4 characters, the guys in the band. I hope that I am accurately capturing the bond that they share. Still, there is quite a bit of work for me to really paint the picture of what they mean to each other. In Chapter 20, we'll get to see "the evil" once again. Also, Anita and Ron will have there first conversation. Check back on Wednesday. Tags: Fiction, Online Book, Rebeleyeball, Paul Gavin Copyright (c) 2006 Paul Gavin. All rights reserved. |
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