Small Problem with Chapter 12

Just admiring my own work when I noticed that I have a pretty significant "continuity" error in Ass' thoughts as he ran. Seems he was thinking a little for Ben - doesn't make much sense. Anyway, I have updated so now Ass thinks for Ass. Later, Ben will do some of his own thinking. Hey, that's part of reading a work-in-progress. Especially, one of my wips. Tags: Fiction, Online Book, Rebeleyeball, Paul Gavin Copyright (c) 2006 Paul Gavin. All rights reserved.