Kiwi Comment

In case you missed it, I had a visitor from New Zealand that left me a very good comment. I thought the observation was excellent, so I thought I'd share it with you. Kelvin said... Kia Ora (Hello) from a krazy blogger down under in New Zealand. I was surfing the blog world, when your blog "popped" up, so I thought I'd say hello. I like writing too - so I'll be back to read your "first" chapter. Could you not have thought of a shorter title for your book ? It lost me after the second word. 10:34 PM My response: Thanks for stopping by. Thanks even more for leaving a comment. As far as the title goes, I know it is extremely long. In my defense, it is something I am trying to do with the whole book. I want the reader to gfeel the uncomfortable nature of my character's lives. It is the reason that the chapters are so short and choppy as well. Maybe it's a dumb idea. Since my blog is about the book "The Break" and about the blogging environment, I am going to use your comment in a post. Cool to have a visitor from the other side of the world. New Zealand is on my list! I'll get there "someday". Tags: Fiction, Online Book, Rebeleyeball, Paul Gavin Copyright (c) 2006 Paul Gavin. All rights reserved.